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ELECTRIC BLUE - closeup

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Description

closeup of

Image size
1016x1470px 633.78 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D800
Shutter Speed
1/250 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
60 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 12, 2013, 1:48:51 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think this is an amazing piece. I like the way the blue stands out and I like the way the orange background compliments it. She looks very realistic. The way you stuck the beads and other pieces of metal really made it pop.

One thing I thought could be improved was adding more depth and shape to the areas that were blue. The hair and the suit looked flat to me. I think you needed more apparent sharp highlights and shadows to emphasise the shape of the clothes and the hair. The composition also struck me as a bit too narrow - I think it might have been nicer if there was more area around the girl.

I hope you found this helpful!